Peer Reviews, Uncategorized, Visionary Imagination

Peer Review 2

Tylah,

I found you creative piece to be highly captivating. Your piece flows beautifully and the level of detail drew me into the story. I felt as though I could see and feel everything you said around me, but I feel as though an image of a burning fire or something else simplistic yet bright with ‘warm’ colours could help to enhance the visionary experience I gained as a reader. I also really liked your ‘dance with the devil’ phrase as this is a quote that is familiar with me which added onto the feelings I took away from your piece. I hope to see more creative pieces written by you in future.

Nicole

[Post: https://tylahfragiadakis.wordpress.com/2018/09/10/entry-2/]

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