Alana,
I really liked reading your blog post this week! You took a simple prompt and you turned it into a well written creative piece. The imagery throughout made me feel as though I was there and I felt as if I was able to feel all the character felt. The use of rhetorical questions helped to keep me engaged and wonder more about the characters experiences than what I was seeing at face value.
The only slight issue I found within your post was a spelling error, but otherwise your post for the this week was extremely well done!
Nicole Walsh 
Good supportive peer review. But when you point out an error- spell it out. We can’t see our own errors! We need experts to point them out! That is your role Nicole!
MG
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