I really enjoyed your Week 5 blog post capturing our visit to the Art Gallery of NSW. I think the way you began summarised our visit overall in detail before talking about the two paintings specifically was a good start to your post! I also like that you included the paintings in the order of where they were during our Gallery tour/
I too loved the painting by Eugene Von Guerard; it truly was breathtaking! Each of the paintings have an extensive analysis with them and you have done well to include this in the summary along with why you liked that painting.
The only changes that I think could be made to your post would be creating a new paragraph separating your discussion of the first painting and the Victoria Hall.
Keep up the good posts!