Peer Reviews

Peer Review 1

Paul,

I really like how well-written this piece is. It’s been written in such a descriptive way that the images are extremely vivid in my mind as I read it.

I really enjoyed the ending and I found the overall piece to be edited quite well as the grammar was good and consistent throughout.

https://paulnguyen1.wordpress.com/2016/08/18/blog-i/comment-page-1/#comment-37

 

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